Go to the Arizona!
Mai and I had a big fight the morning of the flight to Arizona. I got angry and say I don’t want to go cause Mai said she would do computing at the pool side while stay in Arizona. So we were really close to can’t go there.
I have departed from Newark 10am and flew for 10 hours but arrived Arizona 3pm. It was feeling wired. Minako-san and Mika-chan came to pick up us. We stop by Panda Express to buy lunch.
After arriving at Minako’s house, we immediately changed into swimsuits and dove into the pool. Then something strange happened. Something like a pebble hit my body and it hurt. The sound like a super big maracas band getting bigger. it was hailing. The sky is just a little cloudy. Crazy weather.
At night, while I relaxing in the pool side, somebody, a small stranger entered. It was a wild rabbit. Arizona is a wonder land.
Aug. 23, 2022
Jim Jan. 02, 2023 at 1:49 PM
I am going to edit your request: "Please correct me when am mistake in my diary,to help me understanding English."
I share two examples. The first only corrects grammar, the second is a rewrite in more standard English.
Please correct me when I am mistakeN in my diary, to help me understand English.
Please help me with my English! I welcome your corrections to my diary entries.